OMG, cliffhanger!!! I know, I've been tardy, I've been back from Yaoi con for a whole four weeks and I've just got around to reading the last couple of chapters *kicks self*
I think you are doing an awesome job with this! Aya's dry stream of conscious thought in the last chapter was damn near hysterical, I love the way he tries to reason things out. It makes me want to squish him! And Omi in this chapter, wow. I think you've written him really well and showed us reactions that normal people would have in a similar situation. I cannot wait until you get the next part up! *randomly hugs you for amazing fic writing*
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Date: 2009-11-27 01:00 am (UTC)I think you are doing an awesome job with this! Aya's dry stream of conscious thought in the last chapter was damn near hysterical, I love the way he tries to reason things out. It makes me want to squish him! And Omi in this chapter, wow. I think you've written him really well and showed us reactions that normal people would have in a similar situation. I cannot wait until you get the next part up! *randomly hugs you for amazing fic writing*
(Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving!)