Oh, I did have one suggestion. Maybe give some sort of explanation as to why Omi and Ken didn't try to call Yohji and Aya back? You said in an earlier chapter that Aya realized he could make it back to Tokyo in a fairly short time, so it leaves a bit of a question there.
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Date: 2009-10-28 05:03 am (UTC)Oh, I did have one suggestion. Maybe give some sort of explanation as to why Omi and Ken didn't try to call Yohji and Aya back? You said in an earlier chapter that Aya realized he could make it back to Tokyo in a fairly short time, so it leaves a bit of a question there.