Oh, you definitely don't need to worry! I really really liked that chapter, and I'm certain all the other readers will think the same!
Well, I'm usually not an Omi fangirl. I mean, of course I like him and he's a very interesting character, but I always had this strange Aya-addiction so I don't read that much Omi fanfics. But your fanfiction and the insights into Omi's thoughts and feelings was really amazing and fascinating, I totally felt with him and didn't even miss Yohji and Aya (which I usually do) because I was so dragged into this chapter. I especially liked the "never felt like a teenager" part because that's how I imagine Omi. I mean, planning missions and killing people isn't exactly what I would consider a normal teenage life... Oh, and you had a really thrilling storyline going on there, the cliffhanger is really huge! I just need to know how this will continue! But despite the drama, you didn't abandon the humour stuff. Thanks for the Siberian Death Watch, you had me laughing for minutes! I mean, I know lots of strange (metal) band names(eg molestation, dark funeral and all the lord of the ring stuff like Minas Morgul or Amon Amarth) and these names are all kind of funny, but Siberian Death Watch just beats them all!*snicker*
Well, anyway,I think you did a great job, hopefully the next part will be up soon! You can't leave us with Ken and Omi having this serious problems going on, can you?
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Date: 2009-10-27 08:08 pm (UTC)Well, I'm usually not an Omi fangirl. I mean, of course I like him and he's a very interesting character, but I always had this strange Aya-addiction so I don't read that much Omi fanfics. But your fanfiction and the insights into Omi's thoughts and feelings was really amazing and fascinating, I totally felt with him and didn't even miss Yohji and Aya (which I usually do) because I was so dragged into this chapter. I especially liked the "never felt like a teenager" part because that's how I imagine Omi. I mean, planning missions and killing people isn't exactly what I would consider a normal teenage life...
Oh, and you had a really thrilling storyline going on there, the cliffhanger is really huge! I just need to know how this will continue! But despite the drama, you didn't abandon the humour stuff. Thanks for the Siberian Death Watch, you had me laughing for minutes! I mean, I know lots of strange (metal) band names(eg molestation, dark funeral and all the lord of the ring stuff like Minas Morgul or Amon Amarth) and these names are all kind of funny, but Siberian Death Watch just beats them all!*snicker*
Well, anyway,I think you did a great job, hopefully the next part will be up soon! You can't leave us with Ken and Omi having this serious problems going on, can you?